Week 2
I have been thinking about my new script a lot but still nothing. I have tried many countless of solutions from watching movies, short film or reading short screenplay written by others to gather some inspiration but unfortunately nothing is working out.
A few things that I could possibly look at is:
- Changing the whole genre
- Rewriting a different script
- Finding a location to write my script around
When I meet up with Duncan next week, I hope to be able to get more clarity of what my script is before meeting him.
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Week 3
The night before meeting up with Duncan, I came up with a whole new script but involving the same two characters but in a different situation. Instead of a typical good cop bad cop situation I came up with a story about a guy who is trying to get rid of his alter ego personality. This was inspired by Fight Club.
Some feedbacks I got from Duncan regarding the new script:
- It's way better than the previous script
- Has a better story
- Less cliche
- Think of a reason to as why Jones is mad at Dave
- Maybe a short backstory of how it all happened
After the session with Duncan, I felt like this was the start of something new. Something that I can finally work towards and fix rather than not having interest in.
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