This week, we got some feedback from Duncan Sarkies for us to develop our script further before he arrives in the next week or two.
Some of the feedbacks I got from Duncan was
- It's very cliche
- Weakest script among the group
- Try to avoid cliche if possible
- Is the flashback necessary?
- How would the audience perceive the child murder if I were to put it in
- It's missing something important
The feedbacks given to me really made me dejected and made me felt really hopeless. Over the week, I will try to find some motivation to write a whole new script and try to avoid using cliches in the script.
This will be challenging as I have lost all hope to do anything. :(
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