BSA 331 - Semester 2 - Week 15

This week we did a feedback session with the whole class from just the rough cut. This is to see and critique/help everyone with what they can improve on or what did not work. It was a really good to have feedback from others as it's like having some fresh eyes on it.

One thing coming into this was me worrying if the switch between Jones and Dave would work. A feedback that was given by the class was that at the moment, it works fine and maybe considering taking a few things out. Overall they said the story worked well with the editing and adviced me to use some sort of sound effects when I cut to the switch.