BSA 331 - Week 3 & Week 4

In these two weeks, I decided to work a little bit more on my story on how it goes.

I was told by Ash that I should develop more into the Exam theme idea that I had and see how it goes. Unfortunately, I could not get a story out of it and tried a different approach by sticking to my main idea.

I then came up with two simple but yet complex idea and started to work on my proposal plans with it too. Both ideas works the same way but would be told differently.

First Idea
The story begins with a well known gang member sitting in an interrogation room with the inspector and the main objective for the inspector is for him to get out as much as he can from the suspect (the gang member). He would then show a series of files/photos/reports of his wrong doings and all the people that he has murdered. When the inspector asks about it, the scene slowly shifts from the interrogation room to how the victim was murdered by the suspect. It cuts back and forth between each murder and shows signs/hints of some form of escape from the suspect and towards the end eventually shows the suspect removing the cuffs. It then shows the suspect going in for a kill and the credit rolls to end the short.

Second Idea
A well-known gang member has been caught. Sitting in an interrogation room with the inspector. The inspector is set to get out as much as he could from the suspect. A series of photos are put on the table and shown to the suspect. As the inspector start’s explaining, the scene slowly changes into what the inspector was explaining. It cuts back and forth between the story and the interrogation room showing or hinting some form of escape from the suspect and eventually shows the suspect removing the cuffs. It then shows the suspect going in for a kill and the credit rolls.

The only difference in these two ideas is one, the stories of being murdered is told while the other is a whole murder story told by the inspector. 

My main idea here is that like to show as little "flashback" scenes as possible and show more of the interrogation room. I'm not so sure yet but I will work on this more once the proposal has been approved.

A form of moodboard for me to refer to.

While I start to work on my proposal, I would need to choose which idea that I would like to stick with and hopefully no changes would be done.